Monday, 20 April 2020
The ginormous snowball competition
Splat splat another snowball thrown in the ginormous snowball competition . It was held
In England in 1983, it was a tough competition everyone was making huge
snowballs. To throw at the other contestants a girl named Emily Was confident that
She was going to win. Because she had super powers she could pause enythithing in the world.She paused everyone and made 56 snowballs. The judges came around to see who would win one judge named Jon sour two contestants. One contestant made 11 snowballs the other one made 22 snowballs, a judge named Ella looked at Emily and said i think we
have a winner.
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Wow Molly, this is an awesome story. You have done so well to really paint a picture in my head while I read it. Have a think about some descriptive words you could add in to make the sentences really come to life. You have done an awesome job and I'm very excited to see more of your writing.
ReplyDeletehey molly your story is sssssssssoooooooooooooo cool i love it
ReplyDeleteHello Molly, this is a very enthralling story. I was drawn in by the title....is Ginormous an actual word? It doesn't matter if it isn't, its a great word! Just read your story over to make sure the sentences are s you want them and this will help avoid extra words etc. Awesome mahi Molly.
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